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Earrings ''Dragonfly''

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Made in Aug 2014
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:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Overall
:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Vision
:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Originality
:star::star::star::star-empty::star-empty: Technique
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Impact

Hi, I want to start with a compliment, the wood burning looks really great.
I love the colors and the feeling of burned stoneware that the image transmits.

On the other hand I think you loose a lot by using the dragonfly charms. The idea could be good but the charms look a bit cheap and give a feeling of mass production and don't do you a favor in my opinion.

What I also like a lot is the back of the earrings and I think you have not put enough accent on it, I would suggest to take a close-up picture of the back too and ad it to the collage.

What I can't see very well on the image is the edge, but in the lower image the left earring looks a bit rough, maybe you could sand it a bit and try to smooth it up at the cutting edge.

Overall the impact is great and the earrings look wonderful on the model.

Continue the good work I wish you a lot of inspiration !